I see that ideas and suggestions for axel-and-alice are welcomed, but can I criticise it?


Criticisms are welcome. Writing axel-and-alice is a very difficult task and the author wants to continually improve the story. If there is anything that doesn't make sense, is incorrect or is just too weird, then Peter Jerrim would like to know.

For instance, you might find some parts of axel-and-alice really interesting and other parts really boring. Peter would like to know what you think about it.

So if you have something to say that might help him improve axel-and-alice then please let him know. If you do , please tell a little bit about yourself so Peter can see from what point of view you are coming from.

Peter also needs to know if you find anything that doesn't work on your browser, e.g. links that don't work, text that is difficult to read or a page that takes too long to download. He would really appreciate knowing about it so that he can try to fix it.

Most of all Peter is interested in ideas about how to improve axel-and-alice.

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